coasterdude5 Posted January 27, 2007 Author Posted January 27, 2007 Yeah, the pop-up has already passed.
coasterdude5 Posted February 2, 2007 Author Posted February 2, 2007 Update 10 June 6th - June 7th, 2023 Â Destruction. It's not the first time to hit this land. Â The trees are here to finish the job. Â The park will be set ablaze. Â The surviving guests will have nowhere to run. Â This curse. 300 years it has lived. Â If I were still "living" today, I would be 327 years old. Â I think back, and I ask myself, "Have I done the right thing?" Â I wonder what my father would have wanted me to do... Â I think he would have supported me. Â But what I had done.. Â Â It engulfs... Â The hotel, burned from the inside. Â So bright, it lit up the sky, just like that day in 1703... Â But it was brighter, I ... Â Guilt can take over us all... Â But I don't feel guilty from this... My guilt is coming from something else...
coasterdude5 Posted February 4, 2007 Author Posted February 4, 2007 Thanks for the comments, keep them coming.
coasterdude5 Posted February 4, 2007 Author Posted February 4, 2007 ^ The fire was pretty bad, but not to the point where the game was unplayable. I held out on the fire scenes as long as I could, because I knew I couldn't hand-delete each one.
Satoshi Posted February 4, 2007 Posted February 4, 2007 Looks like the park's already been caught up in horrible curses by dead spirits and they gonna smash it up! Â Thanks for an awesome story!
coasterdude5 Posted February 9, 2007 Author Posted February 9, 2007 Update 11 June 7th, 2023 and beyond  Guilt.  All the terror I've caused for the past 300 years...  The village, I burned...  Geboldi Lakeside  The fires.  The destruction, that I caused.  All for me, but I have something to say.  That day...  They let us all off with a warning, and left.  They didn't kill my parents.   I did.  THE FINALE WILL BE POSTED ON FRIDAY, FEBRUARY 16th
coasterguy4 Posted February 9, 2007 Posted February 9, 2007 AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Thats crazy!!!! Great job!!!!
America Sings Freak Posted February 10, 2007 Posted February 10, 2007 Wow! That's freaky, I always thought she was a cute nice little girl, but now we see her alter ego!
socalMAN123 Posted February 12, 2007 Posted February 12, 2007 Woah, talk about a twist in story! Awesome! Can't wait for the finale! ---Brent
coasterdude5 Posted February 16, 2007 Author Posted February 16, 2007 The final update is tomorrow. What does everybody think is gonna happen?
coasterdude5 Posted February 16, 2007 Author Posted February 16, 2007 Update 12 November, 2023 and beyond  Hello again, we seem to always meet at this spot. It looks a bit different now, doesn't it.  So little is left...  1,496 didn't make it out of the park.  It almost looks like a different planet now.  I tried to warn them...  But unfortunately, it's a little hard for me to talk to people.  But I can't blame them...  I've been dead for 300 years.   But I actually think she's done.  Maybe...  Maybe. That word, it's used too much.  YEARS LATER....  The curse returning to its cave  It's taken 300 years, but it's finally happening.  All of the terror, misery...  Coming to an end.  Months later...  The seasons changing, cleaning the valley.  All of the past that remains.  A new chance.  It's been so long since I saw this site.  In this state...  Lydia, finally in a state of rest.  My place beside her.  And the people who were affected  Goodbye.  VIDEO - http://www.coaster101.com/videos/deepvalley2video4_0001.wmv
cprocks22 Posted February 16, 2007 Posted February 16, 2007 Great update, you would be a great horror/suspense writer. However no matter how great your update is im still scared to watch the video
bovinejumpsuit Posted February 16, 2007 Posted February 16, 2007 excellent work. I didn't really understand the storyline as well as most but the way you moved the park on and 'stuff' was excellent. The closing video was great too but i was a little disapointed that the video didn't end in a suprise but then you can't have everything can you. Â Congratulations on finishing this project but I still prefer your (proper) parks
coasterdude5 Posted February 16, 2007 Author Posted February 16, 2007 ^ I had originally planned on a "scare" in the final video, but I decided it would sorta break up the flow and that it might turn into a "one trick pony." But it was considered.
timetrial3141592 Posted February 17, 2007 Posted February 17, 2007 I was bored last night, so I did this. Is this familiar, John?
coasterdude5 Posted February 17, 2007 Author Posted February 17, 2007 Nice job, it's almost identical!
timetrial3141592 Posted February 18, 2007 Posted February 18, 2007 For some reason, Racer stood out in that park. It was well-colored and it flowed like a Premier would. I added a slight variation to it (the s-turn dives down, then climbs up again) to my latest Idylwild Heights, then added a sign near my dive machine: "6/6/2023. Never Forget." And then I spent about an hour trying to get three specific segments of the track invisible.
America Sings Freak Posted February 18, 2007 Posted February 18, 2007 All I can say is WOW. I believe your parks are unbelievable and hope that you can continue horror parks like this. Your ending was so touching and mad me almost feel bad for the girl, but there is one thing I would like explained why did the girl kill her parents?
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