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Update 10

June 6th - June 7th, 2023

 

Destruction. It's not the first time to hit this land.

 

The trees are here to finish the job.

 

The park will be set ablaze.

 

The surviving guests will have nowhere to run.

 

This curse. 300 years it has lived.

 

If I were still "living" today, I would be 327 years old.

 

I think back, and I ask myself, "Have I done the right thing?"

 

I wonder what my father would have wanted me to do...

 

I think he would have supported me.

 

But what I had done..

 

 

It engulfs...

 

The hotel, burned from the inside.

 

So bright, it lit up the sky, just like that day in 1703...

 

But it was brighter, I ...

 

Guilt can take over us all...

 

But I don't feel guilty from this... My guilt is coming from something else...

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Update 11

June 7th, 2023 and beyond

 

Guilt.

 

All the terror I've caused for the past 300 years...

 

The village, I burned...

 

Geboldi Lakeside

 

The fires.

 

The destruction, that I caused.

 

All for me, but I have something to say.

 

That day...

 

They let us all off with a warning, and left.

 

They didn't kill my parents.

 

 

I did.

 

THE FINALE WILL BE POSTED ON FRIDAY, FEBRUARY 16th

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Update 12

November, 2023 and beyond

 

Hello again, we seem to always meet at this spot. It looks a bit different now, doesn't it.

 

So little is left...

 

1,496 didn't make it out of the park.

 

It almost looks like a different planet now.

 

I tried to warn them...

 

But unfortunately, it's a little hard for me to talk to people.

 

But I can't blame them...

 

I've been dead for 300 years.

 

 

But I actually think she's done.

 

Maybe...

 

Maybe. That word, it's used too much.

 

YEARS LATER....

 

The curse returning to its cave

 

It's taken 300 years, but it's finally happening.

 

All of the terror, misery...

 

Coming to an end.

 

Months later...

 

The seasons changing, cleaning the valley.

 

All of the past that remains.

 

A new chance.

 

It's been so long since I saw this site.

 

In this state...

 

Lydia, finally in a state of rest.

 

My place beside her.

 

And the people who were affected

 

Goodbye.

 

VIDEO -

http://www.coaster101.com/videos/deepvalley2video4_0001.wmv

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excellent work. I didn't really understand the storyline as well as most but the way you moved the park on and 'stuff' was excellent. The closing video was great too but i was a little disapointed that the video didn't end in a suprise but then you can't have everything can you.

 

Congratulations on finishing this project but I still prefer your (proper) parks

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For some reason, Racer stood out in that park. It was well-colored and it flowed like a Premier would. I added a slight variation to it (the s-turn dives down, then climbs up again) to my latest Idylwild Heights, then added a sign near my dive machine: "6/6/2023. Never Forget." And then I spent about an hour trying to get three specific segments of the track invisible.

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All I can say is WOW. I believe your parks are unbelievable and hope that you can continue horror parks like this. Your ending was so touching and mad me almost feel bad for the girl, but there is one thing I would like explained why did the girl kill her parents?

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