Song lyrics

Lyrics that were previously posted here were written in a moment of temporary whine-sanity. Please disregard any emo lyrics you have read in this space. Tanx!

Thats pretty deep! Now get it to music and then you will be set!

Falling.

 

The echo of the words you say

Dripping in my brain...

For on that day I was slipping away.

Dwelling on the icy surface

The malice lurking in your thoughts...

The words you mentioned

The things you said...

Freezing in words.

Melting in dread

How can I be sure

That I'm not dead.

 

[Chorus]x2

I loosen my grip

To fall into thought

Gasping for air

I drown in dispair

The pain that I feel

Preparing to rein

And It's all too real.

 

Your words were morbid

And washed away

The happy things

That brighten my day

The things that make

All dismay

Fade away.

Reaching out into the sky

For I can see

It's all a lie.

I'm feeling numb.

 

[Chorus]x2

I loosen my grip

To fall into thought

Gasping for air

I drown in dispair

The pain that I feel

Preparing to rein

And It's all too real.

 

Falling, falling

Into cold

Freezing thoughts

For I'm the mold

Made for slaughter

Made for care but

Au Contrare

The tables turned

And I was burned

Stereotyped

I tried to pick

A valid fight

But as it seems

My heart still bleeds.

 

[Chorus]x2

I loosen my grip

To fall into thought

Gasping for air

I drown in dispair

The pain that I feel

Preparing to rein

And It's all too real.

 

The deadening tone

Of the voices in my head

The screaming and shouting

The horror and dread

These words are they true?

I hang my head low

In a deep crimson hue

for the power of speech

The abuse of it too

Had wrecked me inside

It could happen to you.

 

[Chorus]x4

I loosen my grip

To fall into thought

Gasping for air

I drown in dispair

The pain that I feel

Preparing to rein

And It's all too real.

 

It's all too real.

It's all too real.

This wins for most cliché's in a single song.

Linkin park called, they want their lyrics back.

Ouch

You know lyrics can practically be anything!! As long as its set to a good tune then I think that is what matters. They can be the best damn lyrics in the world but if the song sucks then your're lost! Look at Come Together by The Beatles. Its all nonsense lyrics but the music is fantastic!!

But as far as your lyrics or words go I like them and think they can be used to fit into a great song!

This wins for most cliché's in a single song.

First of Calaway I think you did a good job, keep it up and Wes lets turn this into a singing contest your turn, i'll admit i'm rubbish so your turn

Meh, get the song together then we'll talk!

Okay 165 Loops! Here is my rendition of "Falling" by Calaway Park! I tried to do my best shitty whiney emo voice. Count how many times I try not to laugh while doing this!

Falling.mp3

Emoooooooo

LMAO!!! I just cried and pissed my pants at the same time!!

Wow I actually kinda liked it!!! The melody was great!!

Sounds like a cross between Smashing Pumpkins and Beatles!!

Wes all you need to do is start you own band now!!

^ I'm actually in a couple bands, but they're just for fun, nothing serious. Goofy lyrics and stuff.

Thats cool! Got any recordings? Im curious as to what your band(s) sound like!

 

This wins for most cliché's in a single song.

Linkin park called, they want their lyrics back.

jeez, harsh mutch?

Ok I just heard some of Wes's band music and I am like inspired to want to make my own band now!! For a band that just to goof around you guys are pretty damn good!

Hey, calaway is lying to all of you, he didn't write that entire song....

one of those lines was all me, baby!

or, sort of atleast.

Hah, that song reminds me of the unicorns a lot.

The Unicorns are awesome.

That's pretty awesome Wes. It's going on my MP3 player.

"Ooooooh, it's all to real! Oooohhhhhh!"

Die.

I think that Wes is officially a god.

Die.

I love you too, hunny.

PS: If you post something like this (lyrics, poetry, writing, music, whatever), and don't expect some sort of criticism or mockery, that's pretty delusional. Not everyone is going to love what you did. You DID get some positive feedback. But not everyone is going to fawn over your work. And to quote the bottom of the main page of TPR:

Disclaimer! You need a sense of humor to view our site,

if you don't have a sense of humor, or are easily offended, please turn back now!

Wes is now ready to take over the lead role in the sequel to Adam Sandlers hit movie "The Wedding Singer".

His rendition of Falling reminded me of Adam Sandlers song "Somebody Kill Me" (Wedding Singer soundtrack Vol 1)

*Grabs Razorblade*

So...Freakin....Good

-Ryan

P.S. Wes, Good Work

Die.

 

I love you too, hunny.

 

PS: If you post something like this (lyrics, poetry, writing, music, whatever), and don't expect some sort of criticism or mockery, that's pretty delusional. Not everyone is going to love what you did. You DID get some positive feedback. But not everyone is going to fawn over your work. And to quote the bottom of the main page of TPR:

Disclaimer! You need a sense of humor to view our site,

if you don't have a sense of humor, or are easily offended, please turn back now!

I didn't get any criticism lmao, I got mockery, but no criticism...

Anyways, I'm in a lighter mood this morning I realised how awful that rendition of my song was, and it made it funny

Especially because:

A: The song's not accoustic. More Billy Talent than Dashboard Confessional.

B: Not sang in "awful whiney emo voice." That drives me as insane as I'm sure it does to everyone else.

C: The song's not emo... I don't talk about cutting myself or wanting to die, it's just me in a pissed off mood

D: You changed the chorus tune every time you sang(?) it

Read the description... "Ignore the sappiness, I was in a bad mood." and some random smiley that I forgot. See, happy mood, happy song, angry mood, angry song and etc.

PS: "The echo of my words you say?" You got a lot of lyrics wrong

"desp*AIR*"